Reconditioned

diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009

Tags: care, friends, future, Life, love, mistrust, moving on, pain, past

I wrote a poem yesterday and by some of your comments, some of you think that I am cold and uncaring. But this was written a long time ago, I wrote it, so I wanted to post it. I would like to shine a better light on myself.

I wrote a poem, with some pretty harsh words.

My friends please don’t think I am disturbed.

I felt this way many year ago.

I wanted some of you to know.

That my life was ugly,

and I had no where to go.

But now me, myself and I.

We have a heart that reaches the sky.

I write these stories on Triond today.

Only as a testimony and display.

I have closed these chapters of my life,

and completely banished this pain.

Now me, myself and I have

have disposed of all this strife.

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diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009
I love people and can handle things in a better way today.
drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009
Well done. good poem. You have a great future.
Themax on Nov 14, 2009
wow! beautiful!!,Thanks
Lisa Clayton Williams on Nov 14, 2009
I haven’t read the other poem…..off to read it now. I totally understand, by the way….I’ve published a few poems that I wrote several years ago when I was emotionally in a different place.
sandie on Nov 14, 2009
i think we all do it, let off steam then once thats out of the way we chill out and relax with a more positive piece of work, i think it does you good.
craigz on Nov 14, 2009
Another good poem.
Darla Smith on Nov 14, 2009
Very nice poem!
CA Johnson on Nov 14, 2009
I enjoyed this poem. It’s better to get things off your chest instead of letting it stay bottled up. If writing about it helps, feel free and keep writing your feelings. Don’t let other people keep you from expressing yourself.
Snooky on Nov 14, 2009
You go my friend I think your diamond shines brighter and brighter I can almost picture you in that illustration

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