Recurring Errors

ShadowPsychos on May 20, 2010

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Each poem that i write

only takes a wondering minute

that most probably explains

why they are so rubbish

i have to jot them down in haste

from a far off distant place

before i once again dissociate myself

from these keen perceptions

i do not fully understand

no trial and error

just errors recurring

curdling distaste

type in the secluded moments

then throw me under

each thought process train

no process to navigate

through such blind sided haze

a shield, a ghost

the daggers on Hell’s gate

fumble in the groans of my head

concentration a sickly block

snatched moans of time

seeking to find the treasure

in this crazy maze

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TwiKnight on May 20, 2010
It’s good to know that you’re an avid writer, and not the procrastinating type like me, which I should be ashamed of, but then…
drishti8 on May 20, 2010
Very well written. How many minutes it had taken to get finished?
Faith Blues on May 20, 2010
You’re very talented. Keep on writing.
ShadowPsychos on May 20, 2010
about five mins just throw some crap together lol
neha80 on May 20, 2010
Excellent sharing. Very good job.
ashan1614 on May 20, 2010
I might be able to scribble down a train of thought in 5 minutes, but it won’t make sense to anyone but me unless I take some time to go back and make it into a cohesive piece.
My4everscotland on May 20, 2010
Good point Shadow, I am very critical of my own writing and often have to read them time and time again till they eventually grow on me, needless to say I hate my poems but just have to get them out, but I love yours…
Atanacio on May 20, 2010
very good points made here shadow like the entry

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