Laying here with you my mind lingers on thoughts that have passed through your eyes…

Sitting here alone my mind wanders,
I watch as the people coincide with my mind,
ever passing my vision,
over and over again.
Am I not to be noticed?
Laying here with you my mind lingers,
on thoughts that have passed through your eyes.
Your movements do echo in stoic rhythm,
over and over again.
Is there an end to this bliss?
Walking along by these shadows,
Not knowing what lurks within.
Curious to learn the unknown,
over and over again.
Will the darkness be brought to light?
Staring as you pass over,
leave us behind for the moon.
Soon enough you’re peaking,
over and over again.
Will we ever be left in the night?

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  • QuinMonty86 on Feb 11, 2009

    That was very nice. loved the flow of it.

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 11, 2009

    Well done Casey. I like this a lot.

  • Lee Altman on Feb 11, 2009

    well written

  • rutherfranc on Feb 11, 2009

    questions awaiting answers that would be vague even when given.. captured my feelings in this one ck..

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 11, 2009

    Good poem Casey, loved the imagery.

  • papaleng on Feb 12, 2009

    lovely with nice flow and vivid imagery.

  • Paul Roberts on Feb 12, 2009

    I got the feeling that your asking for an answere that had no original question,leaving the reader to format the readings .Very entertaining.

  • Nathan G on Feb 19, 2009

    Interesting poem, kept me thinking throughout it.

  • Tate Morgan on Feb 21, 2009

    Casey i cant follow the thought of this one

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