I hope that you can feel what touches me.

Red Rock
17 Mar 09

Found a flat smooth rock
Enjoyed feeling the smoothness
But it was just a plain rock
Nothing special
So I decided
Went through my paints
Picked out bright metallic red
Gently brushed it on one side
Set it down to dry
Looks pretty
Next day I brush the other side
Gently stroking
Bringing out a beautiful red shine
Now its pretty shine
Makes the smoothness
Even more tantalizing
Would you like to touch
My smooth red rock

More of my work:

First Time
Stars
Good Morning my Goddess
Secret WoW

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  • Joie Schmidt on Mar 17, 2009

    Beautiful, gentle work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 18, 2009

    loved it… loved the flow!

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 18, 2009

    You are a true artist Milton and I liked the poem too.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 18, 2009

    Great poem!

  • lisa on Mar 18, 2009

    Your plain looking rock sounds pretty now.

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