A night once celebrated will never be forgotten. It were full of love, hopes and contentment.

Red wine so sweet

Your kisses melted my heart

Our feet got tangled.

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  • ozicha on Jan 7, 2012

    nice share

  • HannanRKhan on Jan 7, 2012

    nice

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 7, 2012

    Great progression. One can feel it happening.

  • aheed411 on Jan 8, 2012

    Allah says: (O ye who believe alcohol and gambling, and monuments and the abomination of Satan avoid it, that ye may prosper * wants only to excite enmity and hatred in the wine and gambling, and hinder you from remembrance of Allah and from prayer: will ye not then abstain) [Table: 90-91].

  • ittech on Jan 8, 2012

    live on

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