Redeem (v) – to recover by payment or other satisfaction; to make up for; make amends for; offset.

So much of life wasted

Catering to the ungrateful

Hearts poured into

One-sided relationships

Loving those who never

Really loved you back

How do we start

Redeeming the time?

 

Slough off the leeches

Cut loose the hangers-on

Scratch some folks off your list

Forgive, forget and move on

And focus on those to whom

You are as important

As they are to you

Redeeming the time…

 

So many years spent

In unfulfilling jobs

Counting down the hours

Doing what we needed

Instead of what we wanted

Hopes and dreams delayed

Can we now begin

Redeeming the time?

 

Figure out what it is

That you love to do

Find a way to make it

Work for you

Plot out a course

And start down the path

Why not you? Why not now?

Redeeming the time…

Sacrificing our very substance

Doing everything for everybody

Being all things to all people

Placing self on the bottom rung

As the lowest priority

Beaten up and worn down

We need to now focus on

Redeeming the time…

 

Love God, love others

But also love yourself

Recognize that it’s okay

To say “no” sometimes

It’s not a bad word

Take time for yourself

To renew and restore

Redeeming the time…

 

 

 © 2009 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Sourav on Sep 23, 2009

    Very good and thoughtful write. I enjoy your poems… truly!

  • ashan1614 on Sep 23, 2009

    Thank you, Sourav! I’ve really taken a liking to your poetry too. And your photos have such great detail. You are multi-talented. :)

  • ken bultman on Sep 23, 2009

    To thine own self be true. Somebody said that. I forget who. Might have been than old English bard.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 23, 2009

    i agree SAURAV is xcellent spirituual

    like u

    good keep it up

    but he is still shy

  • syedaqa on Sep 24, 2009

    Nice one thanks for sharing

    Best regards

  • Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 24, 2009

    Yes redeem the time because days are evil!

  • diamondpoet on Sep 25, 2009

    I promise that I can relate to every word that you have written, I have express similar words in my writting.

  • deep blue on Oct 31, 2009

    Very well written, Andrea. We could only retrieve the best we could and just be sorry for those we cannot recover. Nice and truthful lines.

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