Original song composition lyrics – italicized lines are sung by a second voice. It’s somehow like two voices conversing.

Redundant (Perfumed)

I’m stinking in the inside
And I’m rotting here redundant for months
You’re stinking in the inside
And You’re rotting there redundant for months
I’m lost in there without a track
I think I’m dead and gone right now
You’re lost in there without a track
You thought you’re dead and gone right now

What should I be looking for?
What have you been waiting for?
Locked up in this rotten floor
There’s Someone outside of your door
I opened up and the fresh warm wind soothe me
And I’m finally been found

Now right there in front of me
That Someone cared and loved me for years
Never will He live you

And forever, no more sadness and tears
Now I pray, oh please help me
Never to taste again that old sagged bag
Yeah… oh yeah…
sure… He will help thee…

Never will I leave you now
Forever He shall stay right now
Never will I be so sad
Forever He shall ease you, lad
I do believe that He’ll help me
And I’m finally fragrant right now

Are you also stinking inside
And rotting there redundant for months?
You’re stinking in the inside
And you’re rotting there redundant for months
You thought you’re lost without a track
And you thought you’re dead and gone right now
The same old verse, here we go again
Hope you’ll hear it too right now

What should you be looking for?
What have you been waiting for?
Locked up in your rotten floor
There’s Someone outside of your door
Just opened up and the fresh warm wind will soothe you
And you’ll also be found…

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  • jubal on Apr 3, 2009

    i like the thought and message. though it’s a little bit long. i also loved the conversation parts! keep up the good work!

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