Drifting away.

       Oh, My darling  Oh, My love, my paradise my everything.

The sun and the moon shine just for you. Mi’ amore your are my wonderful wonderful.

Flowers bow when you walk by out of envy. You a shroaded by angels where ever you go.

You are gorgeous, glamorous, gilded with radiance. How could I ever live without you.

You make bells ring, you are my everything. Oh, my love, YOu——-PAUSE

                       SNAP OUT OF IT DUMMY, and get out of the mirror; it’s time to go to work.

Foot note:  1st painter ” Say Dude,” is your last name Joe?”

2nd painter–” No man, why do you ask?”

1st painter  “Cause you sure are sloppy.”

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  • diamondpoet on Oct 28, 2009

    I keep saying you definitely missed your call. Funny you!

  • Frances Lawrence on Oct 28, 2009

    That was very funny

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 28, 2009

    All I can say is this is a reality check.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 28, 2009

    nice,

  • athena goodlight on Oct 29, 2009

    it seems as a reflection of narcissism
    You’re very creative. Good one

  • deep blue on Oct 31, 2009

    Nice one my friend.

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 31, 2009

    lol … okay I will move from the mirror.. and try to be less sloppy.. oh wait? you not talking to me, i do not know you, *laugh* love it!

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