Palindrome.

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Blustery blowing winds, icy, cold
among branches broken, crying, on shiny frozen tears,
with solemn stillness around frosted white trees
guarding magic and glitter of wonderland.
Red cardinal highlights white snowy blanket
while singing melody with chickadee
capped black and whispering.   
Air cold and crisp, it’s

Winter

Its crisp and cold air whispering,
and black capped chickadee
with melody singing,
while blanket, snowy white, highlights cardinal red.
Wonderland, of glitter and magic, guarding
trees white frosted,around stillness, solemn with
frozen tears,shiny on crying broken branches,among
cold, icy winds blowing blustery.

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  • ken bultman on Dec 14, 2009

    Not only are you ultra-capable of writing this type of poetry you did so with such imagery this time I had to turn up the heat. So good.

  • miraj on Dec 14, 2009

    Ohh my god!!This is absolutely incredible,I bow to your talent ma’am.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 14, 2009

    You painted a picture with your words, a beautiful picture.

  • kate smedley on Dec 14, 2009

    Glynis is right, you have painted a stunning picture with your beautiful word choice. A true reflection of winter.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 14, 2009

    Excellent poem!

  • cafftee on Dec 14, 2009

    Katie, that is so cleverly done, and the way you have made the words fit such a format is amazing because there is not a line that feels forced in any way. I am standing and clapping!

  • Tlchimes on Dec 14, 2009

    Wonderfully done

  • STEVE666 on Dec 14, 2009

    Now that’s original. Brilliant!

  • diamondpoet on Dec 14, 2009

    Wow magnificant pic and great write.

  • TroostAvenue on Dec 16, 2009

    Very nicely constructed.

  • revivor on Dec 17, 2009

    great work it really is palindromic!!!
    This one has a similar theme
    http://authspot.com/poetry/the-stress-finally-got-to-me/

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