Story poem.

There’s not a lot for me to say
Who let a dream just slip away
I blame it on a brash blind youth
Who hadn’t learned to see the truth
I wish that he were me today

And oh the things that he would say
Of all he did that caused dismay
If he had taken time to see
That one day he would become me
Whose dreams are now called yesterday

There isn’t much for him to say
When all is now in clear display
Such memories of days gone by
He doesn’t see why I should cry
Could I be he for just one day

Now there we were what could we say
Was this a dream that went astray
This once was me now standing there
So unlike me without a care
This promise that was yesterday

There’s not a lot for me to say
Who let a dream just slip away
Now he is I and I am him
Reflections of a passing whim
A memory that was today

 

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  • tankermone on Jan 25, 2012

    Contemplation indeed, and a wonderful poem!

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 25, 2012

    Very thoughtful poem. At first I was hesitant about that rhyme scheme, but it worked out well, in the end. I think you wrote a poem prior to this in that style Maybe it was someone else. And I like how the last stanza refers back to the first one. The intentional convolution of time worked well but the reader has to pay attention. I really enjoyed it.

  • J L Carey Jr on Jan 25, 2012

    Well done, Martin

  • ittech on Jan 25, 2012

    Very well stated :)

  • indianwriting on Jan 26, 2012

    now he is I and I am him…
    i liked it

  • aheed411 on Jan 26, 2012

    Great work

  • ImKarn23 on Jan 26, 2012

    beautifully self aware, but sad. to me – any and all growth and evolution is useful. Those able to ‘grow’ should be grateful for their ability – for most never do..

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 26, 2012

    Very well written.

  • marqjonz on Jan 26, 2012

    Very, very well done.

  • avissado on Feb 3, 2012

    wonderful you are a great poet!

  • avissado on Feb 3, 2012

    wonderful you are a great poet!

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