A look back to the good old days on the farm and a slower, closer way of life.

Out behind the red barn where Grandpa used to smoke,

lying in the tall grass; what memories this evokes.

I lie beneath the willows that shimmer in the breeze,

and, remember days together spent in the old house ‘neath the trees.

In winter we would sled the hills, cries frozen in midflight.

We’d skate the pond, and build a fort, make snowballs for a fight.

Come Spring we’d fish, and gather flowers, and till the land for sowing.

We’d dig the soil, and plant the seeds, or take the boat out rowing.

By summertime we’d toss the hay, and picnic on the lawn.

We’d search the sky for well-loved stars, and talk the night ‘till dawn.

In autumn, we would gather fruits of seeds that we had sown, and

Decorate the Church hall for another Harvest Home.

But now the folks are dead and gone, and all those happy times

Are merely ghosts whose shadows move across my tired old mind. 

Now folks tell me “you can’t go home,” how true that may well be,

But when I see an old red barn, it brings back home to me.

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  • mo hoyal on Oct 24, 2009

    My Darling Val,
    This is truly beautiful and so synchronistic to a new article I am placing with Triond in the next day or so. I too, have been reflecting on what we used to call, “the good old days”, and to me, they were! I refuse to believe that people say, “oh, you’re just getting older, blah, blah”. Times have changed and uncomfortably so. I go with you and how I wish I could go back to the safe confines of my bedroom, in the loving home of my parents.
    Thanks so much for giving us beautiful things to read from you!
    Yer Pal,
    Mo

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 24, 2009

    Gosh! This is such a well crafted and beautifully written poem. It makes me think of my childhood days when we did many things the same as you. Wonderful work.

    Christine

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 27, 2009

    What a lovely piece! I was transported by your words. Just wonderful, Valerie.

  • alc on Oct 31, 2009

    I grew up in a very tiny town in Alabama…we didn’t have running water nor electricity until I was 8…Now I’m 20 living on my own and I have never taken anything for granted because I know what it feels like to have nothing but your family! This was a great flashback for me! Thanks for the share!

  • Rookie Expert on Nov 1, 2009

    Aaaww, your words are heartfelt. This is waht makes it a wonderful piece! I love the picture too.

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