This poem is about a thief who gets reformed by the acts of two little kids.

someone knocked twice on my door
at this time of night? i wondered
i hesitated but thought a second
wat if its help they are asking for
opened,and faced an pistol ,i shuddered
i wanted to close and hide behind
i tried but he shot me and i kept bleeding
he crept in ,for money he started searching
my little son came rushing out
hugged me tight and screamed out loud.
“you gotta face me first, mister”.
he was followed by his younger sister.
She too hugged me tight and cried
thier falling tears i rose to dry.
i told them to be brave and strong
told em to close thier eyes and say a prayer
and said “daddy’s going,wont be back for long”
but they didnt close but helplessly stared.
the thief gave them a sympathic look
but told em tat he had no choice.
but my little son stood up and said
“he will have given if you had asked,mister”
his sister went in and came with a book
the book tat titled “The Lords Voice”
she had the faith in her eyes tat said
“keep it,you need it more than us,mister”
the thief took it but threw the sack back
“i came here to steal,with a cold hard heart,
but you little ones have stolen it,
and replaced it with love i always lacked ,
giving me a chance for another start,
you little ones are the great gods gift”
he said em with tears sliding down his face
tat was beginning to shine with a growing grace.
he regreted for all the deeds he had done
now he’s sorry, now he’s gone.
leaving the kids all alone,he’s gone home.
as a better human,trying hard to mend
the wounds on this running clock.
unleashing a heart forever thought to be locked.
_Ronne

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  • Preets on Jan 6, 2009

    hey..ronnie…awsom poem yaar…wreally gr8…i likd it lodzz…u hv got gr8 future dear!!….wish u al Luck…get bright future…njoy!!

  • Ann on Jan 6, 2009

    heya shorty,
    good to see ya writing poems again.
    rember the time we sat down together and wrote the poem
    \”Fallen 4 You\” in 11th std..

    too bad i had to go back ..
    i\’m missing ya!

    and about this poem,,
    hmm..knowing ur true potential
    i believe there;s still more to come…lols

    lov ya,

  • Ebin Paul on Jan 7, 2009

    Heya,

    Wow Ronne,ya are getting better at this..

    keep writing..
    keep rocking..

  • Ebin Paul on Jan 7, 2009

    and hey,
    i saw your promotional song’s lyrics..
    really mindblowng..

    i’m really eager for the release of ur album..
    you rock ron..

    bubbye

  • Nithin on Jan 7, 2009

    really superb.!

  • Aaron on Jan 7, 2009

    cnt believe dis 1 came out of u!
    good work! keep banging ur fists on dat desk!

  • Helen on Jan 8, 2009

    Another mindblower from my little buddy..
    whoa Ronne…u are absolutely unique.

    keep on writing …you are bound to make it big very soon..

    and hey you also got a new fan
    MY MOM ….is so damn crazy about u..
    keeps asking me all kinda questions..

    and she wants to meet u oneday..
    heheh…..lols

    rock on Ron!

  • Gopika on Jan 8, 2009

    Ronne strikes again..

    WOW!
    good yaar!

  • Ranju on Jan 8, 2009

    yeah,

    its a prde to have a poet living next door..
    but do keep an eye on ur marks k..dont let tat fall..

  • Jerin on Jan 8, 2009

    great work here Ron!

  • Sneha on Jan 9, 2009

    dats awesome!!!

    hw do u get these ideas??

    u rock dude!!!

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