Refreshing thy spirit.

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Pink petals scatter
Dancing before thee
A breath of fresh air

Lush grass touches
Tickling thy bare skin
Giggles giggling

A tiny bird resting
Upon thy gentle hand
Thy soul set free

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Free-spirited sprite
Thy spirit in delight
Refreshing thee

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  • CVSivaprakashan on Sep 18, 2010

    Refreshing indeed.

  • vijayanths on Sep 18, 2010

    nice share.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 18, 2010

    That is such a lovely piece.

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 18, 2010

    I always find delight in reading your well-crafted lines.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 18, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, this is a very delightful piece. It’s good to see Mina so playful.

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 18, 2010

    Beautiful poetry

  • giftarist on Sep 19, 2010

    Such lovely piece.

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 19, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Goodselfme on Sep 20, 2010

    Beautifully penned piece of prose. Lovely!

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 20, 2010

    Nice poem! It’s uplifting :)

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