She looks upon the copper curls.

The golden curls she used to know
Back in her younger years,
Now have changed, not gradually,
To sparkling copper swirls.
The copper curls sit next to her,
As she watches his diligent hand.
His beauty she cannot resist,
Even though it’s against better verdict.
She merely looks upon his curls.
She dare not come too close,
For if she did, she would surely know,
The maniac that lives inside.
So solemnly she gazes upon his curls,
And she silently tells herself,
“Just wait because the time, it comes,
It comes too quickly and goes to never be seen again.”

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  • Fipi on May 11, 2008

    The copper swirls remind of Rutti. :P

  • Candice on May 11, 2008

    Hmmmm…
    Kinda interesting. And it reminds me of Jane Eyre for some really really wierd reason.
    It doesn’t even have anything to do with Jan Eyre.
    I guess it’s just the subject of that type of relationship. But you probably haven’t even read Jane Eyre, so I’m shutting up.
    I liked it, Joe.

  • Laura on May 11, 2008

    I’m with Fipi on this one, it really reminds me of Rutti…but I liked it. It was very poetic. =)

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