A relationship on the rocks.

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Not understanding,

Your logic of thinking,

Constantly nagging,

Leaving me pondering.

Why can’t you talk to me,

Threatening with leaving,

Wanting to pull us through,

This can’t be a relationship.

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  • Darla Cooke on Oct 23, 2009

    Very true.

  • Mean lean gangster girl on Oct 23, 2009

    Great poem. Some times I have had boyfriends say a similar thing to me.

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 23, 2009

    A true information

  • Tracey Parece on Oct 23, 2009

    I am looking forward to reading more poems by you. This poem definitely sums up an experience that many people have had. I have been spending more time lately reading and supporting other Triond users, and I am enjoying it immensely. Have a great day.

  • Atanacio on Oct 23, 2009

    Again a very well published poem

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 23, 2009

    Excellent poem!Your words are so true and I think many of us have been there before.You definately have my like!

  • Aiyanna on Oct 23, 2009

    How true!! :)

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