Poem about the feelings of a bride on her wedding day…

Oh hold me close my love, on this our wedding day,

its a blessing from above, in your arms I want to stay…

We shared two little words, when we whispered I do,

those words our god heard, the witness that is true…

Through the sands of time, many mountains we’ll climb,

many storms to weather, we will conquer together…

May our tears be far and few, never hear a word of scorn,

our love be so dear, for this we were born…

No rivers are too wide, No oceans are so deep,

we will handle in our stride, in peace we will sleep…

Through the years we’ll learn, the powers of loves way,

for each other we’ll yearn, as we remember this day…

Let our marriage bed be, the size of a swords blade,

a haven for you and me, and our love will never fade…..end

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Comments (6)
  • AlmaG on Dec 11, 2009

    Wow! that’s so beautiful and heartfelt :)

  • drelayaraja on Dec 11, 2009

    Nice one
    :-)

  • BRUCE KELLY McCURDY on Dec 12, 2009

    Reads like a great Vedic or Parsi work. Beautifully written. Not just a good quality poem. It is written like that of a poet who has already arrived. Good fortune in your future life and your works!!

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 12, 2009

    Thank you very much Bruce, I really appreciate your very learned comment in this field…I’am really very new at this….and your words are very upbuilding,thank you again…

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 12, 2009

    thank you almag and drelayaraja for your loyalty and always a pleasure to see you here and leaving wonderful comments…choice..

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 12, 2009

    Lovely poem!

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