You can sometimes just remember the begining and the end……

as I sit in the very same step we once sat….

I remember our first kiss

Every moment we spend together….

Remembering those moments we just let to dissappear 

They faded away like every last breath I take

To write this to you my dearest…..

As you once said nothings forever

I just thought we would make it threw whatever……

But we couldn’t even make it to see the sun rise

You just left one cold night 

Without a say……..

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  • Your Old Friend who emailed You a Story to Comfort You on Jul 6, 2011

    Time to move on what can I say,
    He was too old for you.
    You were fourteen on that day,
    But he never loved you true.

    Moreover you were just a child,
    The one he used so bad.
    But when he left he hurt bad,
    But he was a cheating dad.

    Whatever I told you was an act,
    Just to comfort you.
    For I knew how you would react,
    If I was empathic to you.

    Well dear Favy its nine months now,
    You are looking to the past.
    Look to the future and you will see,
    Life is not all that fast.

    When you slow and check you pace,
    You will see his wife and child.
    His cheating life will bring disgrace,
    For your beauty her defiled.

    He robbed you precious smile from you,
    He wrenched love in your heart.
    He killed the spirit you had in you,
    And made you feel like dirt.

    I told you I wouldn\’t judge you life,
    But I see you like a child.
    Go and speak to the REAL father about his wife,
    And he will have the police case filed.

    For Now you are a rape victim girl,
    Not a woman at all.
    You were humiliated and victimised hard,
    And your esteem did once fall.

    Go and confide to your father,
    Not to your cheating mother.
    I heard from the bird way up high,
    Your mother did that mans arms fly.

    For he did the mother and grandmother before you,
    And then went to kill his cow on slaughter.
    Had a night of ecstacy,
    And is now a third time father.

    He is kick and beat you like a violent man,
    He has melting words.
    But Unfortunately he is a cheating man,
    Has no idea of double edged swords.

    As for me I said there would be no other,
    Apart from my best friend.
    He has since returned to me,
    In real he did descend.

    For he moved from North to South,
    To marry the trout.
    Then went to preach the word of mouth,
    And became a lout.

    Nothing can compare you to him,
    You are a girl so sweet.
    Stop going back to remember them,
    And go back to study retreat.

    You ar going to join the navy,
    And learn to love yourself.
    You will soon write your book,
    And put it on a bookshelf.

  • dino renaldo on Jul 6, 2011

    nice sahre..favy21 thanks

  • samgoldencoffee on Jul 7, 2011

    well done..

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