Someone just remembering.

I sit and stare out of my window,
my eyes do not see what is there.
I find myself unaware that time,
has stood still but is slipping bye.
Not blinking in case I erase,
beautiful image of you that will,
stay with me until I am no more.
Your soft touch still fresh in my,
memory the deep breath that releases from me,
remembering how you loved me.
Remembering how you wanted me.
Remembering how you took me.
My stare is broken all I have left is,
words that are unspoken.
No one to hear me cry.
No one to ask the reasons why,
you haunt my daydreams.
You can make me blind to my real world,
when you take hold.
I do not fight I have no need,
I have no power when you beckon.
Your the one that has the lead.
I hold on tight enjoy the ride,
this is when I am completely satisfied.

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  • Mr Ghaz on May 14, 2009

    Excellent!..that was wonderful and lovely poem..a must read ..well done and thanks for sharing this great stuff

  • Darla Cooke on May 14, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • Peter Cimino on May 14, 2009

    WOW…true unadulterated passion. Very nice.

  • Riley Themend on May 14, 2009

    Nice, I can realte to those days where I feel reminiscent

  • George W Whitehead on May 15, 2009

    Great poem, cardy.

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