Thinking back to my early working life!

Remembering life through a frosted lens.
Quite often I’d steer my pencils, and pens,
To write poems of love in the mist-filled dale,
As a draughtsman at work in Ebbw Vale.

For there the Open Hearth belched its song,
With fumes and dust all summer long.
My thoughts, not as they should have been there,
Would waywardly drift to more pleasing air.

For then did I, forget such toil,
And dream of a time where rich garden soil,
Would nurture a flower in early May,
And life also, for me, would bloom that day.

Richard Peej

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  • Citra Florenca on Apr 11, 2010

    Beautiful!

  • Pаtsy Collins on Apr 12, 2010

    Ah yes, thoughts of our gardens are a wonderful distraction from less pleasant surroundings.

  • richardpeeej on Apr 12, 2010

    Thanks Citra glad you liked it.
    Thanks this is true Patsy. I have missed reading your short stories and poems-so glad you are back.

  • diamondpoet on Apr 12, 2010

    Very lovely piece, and nice flow.

  • Adam Henry Sears on Apr 12, 2010

    Hi, Richard.

    This is a good one, but for some reason it seems so familiar. Are you on other poetry sites?

    Anyway, thanks for sharing and have a good one.

  • richardpeeej on Apr 12, 2010

    Thank you so much diamondpoet I am glad you liked it.

    Yes Adam I do submit my work on other sites too. Thanks for your visit.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 13, 2010

    That’s a beautiful poem Richard, I love the use of language in this one.

  • richardpeeej on Apr 13, 2010

    Thank you Kate -so kind of you to say so :-) Richard

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