This is how I’m remembering and honoring my Papa in my mind this Father’s Day. He and my mother are now both retired and are living in the beautiful island of Panglao, Bohol.

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If there’s one thing

I couldn’t forget about you, Pa,

it would be your thoughtfulness.

You may not be quite vocal

about your affection, but it would always manifest

in the way you care for us all.

I would always cherish in my mind

your beloved face wearing a worried look

whenever one of us was not home by six.

And when somebody’s ill or in pain,

anxiety would often line your face

and you’d give us all the remedies you could think of.

Now that we’re all adults and live in different cities,

you still show how thoughtful you are

by sending us text messages thru your cell phone.

Image by kiwanja via Flickr

On this special day for fathers,

we may be apart, but my mind will be devoted to you

as I relive how kind and thoughtful you are as a father.

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  • Unofre Pili on Jun 18, 2009

    Your father will be more than happy to read this lovely poem. Happy Father’s day to your father kabs.

  • Joe Dorish on Jun 18, 2009

    Nice tribute to your father, Happy Father’s Day to all dads!

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 18, 2009

    Thank you for that, I miss my folks dearly.
    Clay

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 18, 2009

    This is a great tribute to your dad, well done! Give you “liked it”

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 18, 2009

    A wonderful tribute to you dad!

  • Sheila M on Jun 18, 2009

    What a wonderful, beautiful tribute

  • ken bultman on Jun 18, 2009

    Very well written. I know Papa is proud of you, too.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 18, 2009

    A lovely tribute. I’m sure your dad will love it.

    Christine

  • Uma Shankari on Jun 18, 2009

    Beautifully expressed semtiments.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jun 18, 2009

    Beautiful tribute to your father, Melody. Happy Father’s Day.

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 18, 2009

    A beautiful tribute to your father, I’m sure he will love it as well. Thanks for sharing :)

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 18, 2009

    Beautiful poem, Melody.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 18, 2009

    I’m sure your papa appreciates having you for a daughter.

  • moteintheeye on Jun 18, 2009

    Wonderful and beautiful way of honoring your father.

    motie

  • PR Mace on Jun 18, 2009

    Lovely tribute.

  • Eunice Tan on Jun 18, 2009

    Very lovely and touching

  • Judy Sheldon on Jun 18, 2009

    What a wonderful and touching tribute to your dad. I sure hope he gets to see it. Does he use a computer?

    Take care & God bless.

  • papaleng on Jun 19, 2009

    such a novel way of remembering your Dad. Happy Father’s Day to your dad, Melody.

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 19, 2009

    I hope he has a wonderful day, this is a beautiful tribute to your father.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jun 19, 2009

    Passing by~Always lovely~~ :) :-)

  • Inna Tysoe on Jun 19, 2009

    Happy Father’s day.

    Inna

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jun 20, 2009

    How special this is! Continue loving him! Go to see him! I only wish I could talk to my Dad. He is in my heart! Thank you for this! Liz

  • Debra. on Jun 22, 2009

    Another moving tribute, Mel! I love how you expressed your father’s love for his children through his expressions. A lot of men are not as openly affectionate as others, but often show it instead through their expressions.Loved it, Mel!

  • OhSugar on Jun 22, 2009

    This is a marveleous tribute to your father. I enjoyed reading it. I give you a click:)

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 1, 2009

    a nice tribute to your loving papa!

  • eddiego65 on Jun 22, 2010

    Another lovely tribute to all fathers!

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