A Song/Poem I just wrote, enjoy.

If you look you will notice Remnants of Eden

in the Beauty of the Dawn

Even though, that paradise is gone

The beauty still lives on, we see it in the smiles of Loved Ones

So many years ago, only Adam would recall

We don’t have the total picture

but we can have a glimpse, makes us wonder

what was it fully like before the fall?

But If you look you will notice, in the fresh dew and the rain

Remnants of Eden still remain 

I know that I will smile on the day

When the Lord comes again to gather up His Bride

I’ve no doubt, that the Lord must have cried

At Adam’s fall, but we’ll see Him soon enough

Then All will be well

When all is reconciled, healed and undefiled

We’ll be Wrapped Forever in His Love Jesus is Lord of All

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  • raman13 on Oct 22, 2009

    excellent

  • johnnydod on Oct 22, 2009

    good stuff this

  • Karen Gross on Oct 22, 2009

    Beautiful poem, John. Very creative – I have never thought of this or read it anywhere else, good food for thought.

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