This poem is about the way I feel about my ex-girlfriend..

Lovely remorse.

I found you my love;

You captured me like I was a butterfly.

You look so sweet and pure, but,

Your intentions were not.

You are true evil; Satan’s work.

I love you but, 

Is losing myself worth it?

I miss you many days, 

But others you wash away with the rain.

Too many tears were counted this time.

So now I am all alone and you refuse to care.

I left you with hopes you would get better, 

But you’re still the same.

Now I am counting the days,

Until I am sane.

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  • bryan21764 on Dec 9, 2011

    Beautiful!!!

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    Keep up the great work!

    Bryan
    “Remember to look at the world not only for what it is, but also for what it can be.”

  • Lovelies240 on Dec 9, 2011

    Thanks Bryan! (:

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 10, 2011

    I like the line
    So now I am all alone and you refuse to care

  • IcyColdJoshua on Dec 10, 2011

    It was something great, good poem :)

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