Rescue Me

Darla Cooke on Jan 26, 2010

Tags: dark night, evil, fear, fright, growl, wicked

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Scary poem.

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My heart races with fear,

my body shivers with fright.

Something wicked lurks nearby,

I can sense its evil presence.

Soon I will be in its clutches,

snatched into the cold dark night.

I can hear it menacing growl,

but I’m too weak to run away.

Please somebody rescue me.

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Comments (20)

giftarist on Jan 26, 2010
Scary pic. Really scared me at first view.
diamondpoet on Jan 26, 2010
Good poem.
amandeep13 on Jan 26, 2010
Lovely Poem

I love this
cardy on Jan 26, 2010
I do love these kind of writes from you you do them so well great poem.
Starpisces on Jan 26, 2010
scary enough, feel like hitting the face… haha..
Judi Eddy on Jan 26, 2010
Good work. enjoyed it. JUDI
drelayaraja on Jan 26, 2010
Lovely poetry
drelayaraja on Jan 26, 2010
Lovely poetry
Christine Ramsay on Jan 26, 2010
You paint a really scary picture.

Christine
Brenda Nelson on Jan 26, 2010
WAKE UP!!!!
its a bad dream.
ken bultman on Jan 26, 2010
It’s probably the tax man.
albert1jemi on Jan 26, 2010
im coming ha ha good one
Ruby Hawk on Jan 26, 2010
Run, Darla, Run
Belinda Dobie on Jan 26, 2010
That’s how I’ve been feeling all day.
Great writing.
STEVE666 on Jan 26, 2010
I’ll rescue you, Darla!
rajeev bhargava on Jan 26, 2010
a really creepy poem that grips the reader. the photo gives the chills.
standingproud on Jan 26, 2010
lol
here I am
take my hand
Sourav on Jan 27, 2010
Very dark poem.
Nice one
Westbrook on Jan 27, 2010
Was it something you ate or drank….or smoked?
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jan 28, 2010
Very intense poem, with the perfect photo.
Excellent display of words!

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