Resigned Heart Beat

Sangeeta Chaudhary on Nov 3, 2010

Tags: Cupid's arrow, indifference, viewers

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New feelings.

My eyes didn’t meet yours

Escaped sight was exchanged viewers

Indifference was not defined

All what I know is beat of heart resigned

From the flow of love to ignorance

Perhaps the beginning of endurance

Of the situation not like Cupid’s arrow

But your theft looks caught narrow

Ran a smile inside

I left anything else behind

I left everything behind.

Sangeeta Chaudhary

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Comments (10)

Dragoonk on Nov 3, 2010
That was beautiful
Ruby Hawk on Nov 3, 2010
Very well done.
dino renaldo on Nov 3, 2010
good post
awesome11 on Nov 3, 2010
Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ranjan Mathews on Nov 4, 2010
Arrows of Cupid
Are real stupid
Some get you numb
And some make you dumb
But you always do succumb.
Catherine South on Nov 4, 2010
Thanks for sharing
Christine Ramsay on Nov 4, 2010
A really lovely piece.
DR.VNS on Nov 4, 2010
Written with feeling
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 4, 2010
When I get the inspiration
Of writing a complete poem
After reading ones edition
Then I compose a full one
Half I post at your place
And
The other half
At mine, for all to trace,
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Hope you get the message clear
For your poetry
I do endear.
lucia anna on Nov 20, 2010
Excellent

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