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Resistance

Christian M Archer on Oct 30, 2008
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About love.

I thought I’d built
the walls high enough
the moat was deep
the gates were strong
Like mist that seeps
in cracks, through spaces
you filled me up -
guess I was wrong.

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  • cindy on Oct 30, 2008

    yay i’m the first to comment. nice work, makes you think. i really liked it..

  • Jared on Nov 1, 2008

    Grah, second comment, lol. I liked it, it was good.

  • Lynn Gunter Harper on Nov 4, 2008

    WOW! Chris, that was beautiful. Knew you were something years ago. I now I see I was correct.

  • Jessica on Nov 22, 2008

    I like it. I love to have a new thing to ponder about. Your writing seems to fulfill my crave. (If that makes sense.)

  • Savannah Epperson on Sep 14, 2009

    I love it

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