Responsibilities

PsychoButterfly on Feb 4, 2009

Tags: art, cigarettes, crazy, fall, Responsibilities, stairs, tequila

One time, between privileged cigarettes and one 14 year-old under-aged tequila, I fell off your stairs while I was about to leave, and you laughed…

You laughed so loud in front of that view
You laughed like you were crazy
But now that i think about it
You did a lot of things acting like crazy
But until today,
I still haven’t figured out
If you pushed me
or if i let my self to fall
But i guess the second one is more valid
Just to make it clear -
- i don’t like to blame others….

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clay hurtubise on Feb 4, 2009
Fun piece! Maybe the step did it because it was BOARDed!:)
Thanks,
Clay
lindalulu on Feb 4, 2009
Nice..I enjoyed it a lot!
Adam Henry Sears on Feb 4, 2009
Hi, PB, how are you?
This is a very neat and questioning free verse. It certainly does make you wonder. Thanks for sharing.
By the way,… I is always capitalized.
Sotiris on Feb 4, 2009
Nice poem!
Inna Tysoe on Feb 5, 2009
Thanks for sharing that.

Inna
hepsi on Feb 5, 2009
It’s impressive. I like it.
Catelin Hoover on Feb 5, 2009
This is interesting writing. PB…you got to watch the bottom step, it’s always the lowest and will trip you every time! Just something my Irish mom use to tell me – (probably was one of those Irish yarns, and full of blarney), ’cause I always tripped on the bottom step…I had trouble seeing it, as I don’t see 3-D!
eddiego65 on Mar 1, 2009
Fun read. Thanks!

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