A magnificent love poem.

One of these days I’ll talk to you about my love

And tell you what I feel.

Everything that is in my heart I’ll reveal.

I’ll not longer be writing verses

And my thoughts I’m gonna undress.

I’ll do the things that I have never dared to do

To see if I can have a little of you.

Impossible things for you I’ll do

And a different world I’ll build for you.

I Give – Love Poem by Francy

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  • rutherfranc on Jun 22, 2009

    that`s a promise girls will hold you accountable.. better get ready for the repercussions..

  • HelloSiti on Jun 22, 2009

    Don’t forget to marry her first before action!

  • swatilohani on Jun 23, 2009

    apt

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 23, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • Francois Hagnere on Jun 23, 2009

    Always so beautiful and so sincere. Your loved one will have to be great to deserve all the love you have to give.
    All the best, my friend,
    François

  • goodselfme on Jun 23, 2009

    Truly a wonderful treasure to come upon and read. The words were placed well and just enough depth in this to be provacative too.

  • LoveNFood on Jun 23, 2009

    good job

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 23, 2009

    Better be careful making those promises, some girl will believe you. neat poem.

  • StumbleUponWriter on Jun 23, 2009

    Nice one, buddy.. ;)

  • irishpen on Jun 23, 2009

    Excellent as always. ~peace~

  • J J Neuman on Jun 24, 2009

    Until you find a person as sincere as you are, keep your guard up!

  • John on Jun 25, 2009

    very well done

  • Tito on Jun 25, 2009

    like it

  • Linda on Jun 25, 2009

    well done Francy

  • JonnieWall on Jun 25, 2009

    made me smile

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