If a joke or poem needs explanation, it is a miserable failure. I can simply say that my original Poem "RE’VERSE’ OF GOD?!" is a satire leaving amply to the learned readers to hail or hate it….

(Original version of the Poem)

(Original version of the Poem)

01

Would it look strange to evolve a fresh theory? 

That human brain is always unmindful of heart!

Think not of a soul, which is at light years away

From the poor human brain unmindful of heart! 

02

Sadness, sorrows, mourning and melancholies,

Mishaps, miseries, melodies and also maladies, 

Poverty, insults, Agitations, Struggles and wars,

Would permeate into the inner layers of brains;

03

Financial loss, frustration, flirtation, falsification, 

Disgust, desperateness, distress and dejections,

May secretly penetrate into the cortex of brain;  

But the pangs of love would lead to brain drain!

04

Neurons, Protons or the ageless Stem cells;

Even the Einstein cannot afford such shells!

For neither the brain teasing, mind blowing

And heart throbbing could be so sustaining!

05

Science alarms us that the eradication of life

Is not far away owing to the global warming; 

 But what about the inherent power of brain,

Which is being eradicated in the modern life? 

06

The human brains clinically die unexplored

For most of the mankind just runs for bread

From dawn to dusk like cattle for grass feed

And back home to read their lives in greed!

07

Then why should they find mind in the brain?

For eating and mating need nothing to drain;

No animal husbandries for men and women!

Though they are rational animals off Heaven!

08

Why they mind cost and risk to wine and dine?

When there is nothing such as yours and mine! 

Finally, only two religions of feminine and men

No lacunae of beds to lie and lay and to be laid!

09

Pubs, clubs, motels, and hotels often offer aid

To date, meet, fool around too and to be paid           

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