Poetry that rhymes on how it shouldnt.

I may not rhyme

but I think that is best. 

The ones that do

seem always a mess. 

It says things that are shallow

or don’t make sense. 

They use words that rhyme

despite not passing the test.

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  • TroostAvenue on Nov 13, 2009

    PB there is a talent here that doesn’t show up in your journal prose. Frankly, I think you say more in a few words here than you could say in a hundred words there. Last line I found a little labored. Might try …but don’t pass the test. TC SP

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