When you spontaneously feel the rhythm in your soul come alive.

She ran out across the field

In the dim of dawn’s early light

She kept running as far as she could go, she never wanted to get tired or slow

Trending swiftly through the green grass growing so low

Her heart felt heavy thumping there in her chest

And she could feel the irresistible drumming sound coming over the crest

She stopped there suddenly, amazed by it all

She never knew the love she felt could make her feel so proud

She shouted out allowed, her joy and candor

Hearing her ancient ancestors chanting rhythms of harmonious splendor,

Giving the love back to her maker so willingly

Letting the universe, God, and stars enjoy this joyous epiphany

 

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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  • Joie Schmidt on Apr 13, 2010

    So lovely and free flowing! *:)

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 13, 2010

    Beautiful poem. Nice rhythm and flow.

  • giftarist on Apr 13, 2010

    Wonderful piece.

  • VTech on Apr 13, 2010

    Nice One , Thanks For Sharing.

  • wonder on Apr 16, 2010

    The poem stretches out to the vast expanse of time and tide, loved the descriptions.

  • wonder on Apr 16, 2010

    Great descriptions….

  • deep blue on Apr 16, 2010

    Well expressed. Those who hear the voice from within usually gets in the way no matter how hard it is.

  • ladym33 on Apr 16, 2010

    Very nice! I could actually envision her.

  • 8Shei8 on Apr 17, 2010

    A beautiful write and wonderfully expressed!

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