Right Where We are

Kim Buck on Oct 8, 2008

Tags: improv, love, man, Relationships, response, Thoughts, together, woman, write

Right where we need to be.

My dearest being
I asked for your idea of
An improvisation to write about
You said “love”
Love, really I thought, and
Stunned by your response
I leapt into finger motion
I couldn’t help but feel
You and I are exactly where we
Should be

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R J Evans on Oct 8, 2008
Lovely!
mdegenhardt on Oct 8, 2008
This is great! I love how it seems that you speak directly to the reader in this and share yourself and love. Marvelous write! Michael
Will Gray on Oct 8, 2008
Nice work. So much passion in so few words. Great job!
goodselfme on Oct 8, 2008
Wonderfully captured with this short write. Well done
jo oliver on Oct 8, 2008
great job
lindalulu on Oct 8, 2008
Ahhhhh..dreaming…lol
Bick Parker on Oct 10, 2008
Short and crisp, and conveying the universal language of love. Very good.
shafi choudhury on Oct 13, 2008
another good one. easy to understand. keep writing
Kim Buck on Oct 14, 2008
Thank you all for your wonderful comments! I appreciate you!
Eric Mendoza on Oct 21, 2008
Everything always is right where it belongs. A marvelous write, indeed.
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Oct 27, 2008
This is nice and very well-written. God bless.
gabbic1219 on Nov 13, 2008
very cute and spoken clerly,nice thoughts!gabbi

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