A chain of unfortunate event leading to abuse.

Of all his fans, she was one ,of this you can be sure .
She fell in love ,with Chris Brown ,and thought this love was pure .
But something there was missing, amongst the glitter and the fame
Chris was still a player, and still playing in the game.
At night he went out with his boys, she thought this was o.k. ,
but he would stay out all night long ,sometimes until the next day .
Though she had played, the game herself ,she stopped when she met him .
She new he was up to no good, coming home with the smell of gin.
At first it happened once or twice a week, then it was three or for,
before she new it, she’d only see him ,when he was closing the door.
So one day she confronted him ,a bad mistake she made.
for this a beaten ,she would take ,her eyes hidden with her shades .
Yet still she stands by her man ,this cycle needs to end ,
Rihanna should send his ass to jail ,some time he needs to spend .
You think if she made an example of him ,other abusers would learn,
raise you hand to a women ,or any other person and jail is where you will burn .

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  • Alexis Flint on Feb 22, 2009

    about time taht someone wrote about this.

  • Morgana on Feb 22, 2009

    Well said…I agree!!!

  • Likha on Feb 23, 2009

    Coming from a man, this is an admirable piece. Celebrity or not, it’s time we stop the abuse and draw the line.

  • Olivia Reason on Mar 19, 2009

    You tell ‘im, brother!

    Normal people don’t go around hitting people they profess to love- why should someone get away with it because they’re rich?

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