A blushing tomato.

A tomato dangles
From a vine
Blushing with pleasure
As a man lips
Brush softly
On succulent skin
Causing tremors
In the garden

Image via Wikipedia

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  • LoveDoctor on Jul 20, 2010

    Lovely personification. You have me smiling and thinking very naughty thoughts. Good one.

  • willie wondka on Jul 20, 2010

    mmmmm interesting piece.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jul 20, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you have me smiling and thinking naughty thoughts too.

  • giftarist on Jul 20, 2010

    That’s one awesome piece. :)

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jul 20, 2010

    Awesome.

  • Vivek Ratan on Jul 21, 2010

    A smile for your poem.

  • Agnes Chin on Jul 21, 2010

    lovely poem..

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 21, 2010

    This is so lovely. We have tomatoes almost ready to turn red and they do look as if they are blushing.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Jul 21, 2010

    I actually loved it– not sure though– whether I should take a cold shower after this read

  • papaleng on Jul 21, 2010

    great personification. Short but meaningful.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 21, 2010

    very neat,

  • webseowriters on Jul 23, 2010

    interesting piece of work, thanks for sharing

  • gracealone on Jul 24, 2010

    Wow! what a lovely poem and the photo is very creative.

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 18, 2010

    Tomato’s can be seductive at times! Good poem! :)

  • M0n3y1989 on Oct 20, 2010

    Lovely poem.

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