A blushing tomato.
A tomato dangles From a vineBlushing with pleasureAs a man lips Brush softlyOn succulent skinCausing tremorsIn the garden
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Lovely personification. You have me smiling and thinking very naughty thoughts. Good one.
mmmmm interesting piece.
Hi Lady Sunshine, you have me smiling and thinking naughty thoughts too.
That’s one awesome piece.
Awesome.
A smile for your poem.
lovely poem..
This is so lovely. We have tomatoes almost ready to turn red and they do look as if they are blushing.
Christine
I actually loved it– not sure though– whether I should take a cold shower after this read
great personification. Short but meaningful.
very neat,
interesting piece of work, thanks for sharing
Wow! what a lovely poem and the photo is very creative.
Tomato’s can be seductive at times! Good poem!
Lovely poem.
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