Silk that ripples.

Smoldering radiance…

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© Lady Sunshine

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  • Buzz J on Dec 13, 2011

    This is wonderful, sweetie. Thanks for the write.

  • megamatt09 on Dec 13, 2011

    Good work.

  • sanataryal on Dec 13, 2011

    Fantastic post.

  • khoziru kun on Dec 13, 2011

    awesome

  • jeepers on Dec 13, 2011

    what is this,….?sorry I didn’t get the point

  • kedaiku on Dec 13, 2011

    I like it,
    Jacky Blog

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 13, 2011

    A wonderful haiku to match that amazing picture.

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 13, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, this piece is beckoning to me too, and the picture is “smoldering radiance” indeed :) .

  • Razorwind on Dec 13, 2011

    He’s got nothing on me.

  • papaleng on Dec 14, 2011

    good use of image, Sunshine and a good Haiku at that. I just find it hard to grasp the lines meaning at first.

  • FX777222999 on Dec 15, 2011

    Sunshine, you like silken muscles..

  • Starpisces on Dec 16, 2011

    while reading your poems, I imagine you wearing long flare skirt, with long hair, reciting poems… so elegant… hehe.

  • dodolbete on Mar 25, 2012

    He’s certainly have a great body… that’s all I can say about him, but you’ve got a way to express it beautifully ^_^

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