Rise

Steve Weitzner on Aug 12, 2011

Tags: evolution, mankind, poem, Poetry, rise, SURVIVAL, war

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My first ever try at a poem.

For the crumbs left after the wars end.
Brother strikes down brother for scraps of
survival.
Seperation of mankind.
Hardened by evolution.

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Martin Kloess on Aug 12, 2011
martin here (the poet) read any one of my (poems).. if it means anything, this is a solid poem. i feel one more beat to your first line, but that’s just me,
Rosettaartist1 on Aug 12, 2011
short and to the point
wonder on Sep 3, 2011
So much is conveyed in just these few words.Grim and expressive.
Eunice Tan on Sep 5, 2011
Sounds wonderful. Keep writing
Joe Ram on Sep 5, 2011
Nice one.

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