Tomorrow is where we look to go. It comes and goes, fleeing faster than a startled doe…

In her eyes our love does show…
…strength through love and love through tomorrow.
Tomorrow is where we look to go.
It comes and goes, fleeing faster than a startled doe.
…As deep a pit as sorrows are, we feel them not, those distant woes,
for with great love our hearts do swell.
We love and live; we live to love.
With that in mind, I say a prayer- a thankful praise to Heaven above.
Far away I soon will stand,
but while I can, I take her hand.
Such a woman…what a sight!
Within this world you will not find,
a being so pure and free from spite
as this angel whom is my wife.
Her eyes are bright and full of life…
In her gaze my mind takes flight.
Her earthly eyes are hardly so…more a world of dancing skies-
passionate enough to bring sunrise…
and under these eyes we watch our new son rise.
It’s early morning and he’s had his cries…
for love and holding,
cuddling and feeding.
With great joy we gave him all and now he is resting, sometimes cooing.
Beneath his coos are baby blues….
…eyes so blue and bright that even the sun begs a view.
Like his mother’s, his eyes do stir.
He looks to me as if he knows…
…how far i have come to see him here and further still I’ll have to go,
but not without my love made known.
Within his name we’ve signed our thoughts…
…our Gift from God…grateful are we that by His hand,
into this world, our son was brought.
I stop to think of all that is good,
but feel true love is best understood,
right here, right now within their eyes.
In these two I take great pride- my handsome son and darling bride.
Filling fast, my eyes do swell, with tears of joy too strong to hide.
Try as I might to keep them inside they fall as free as rivers flow.
In this moment there is no woe…
…just tears of joy and love bestowed.

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  • rutherfranc on Jan 20, 2009

    great consolidation of tributes.. from God, your parents, your wife and then your son.. praising them all in one emotional piece!

  • C Jordan on Jan 20, 2009

    Well written

  • Morgana on Jan 20, 2009

    So cute , beautiful poetry.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 20, 2009

    Excellent! That\’s really interesting poem. I loved it!

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 20, 2009

    Hmmmm, Wow! That’s my rising son that wrote that. (Smile) Hey everybody, that’s my son that wrote that. Hey, over here. That’s my daughter-in-law and grandbaby he’s talking about: that’s right I am going to shout out. That was went deeper than the titanic, but flew so high and fast you stirred angel’s to panic.

    Excellent! Te quiero mi hijo, nueda, y nieto bien hermoso.

  • John Paul on Jan 20, 2009

    Thanks for the compliments everybody. Especially to you Dad. Glad you enjoyed it. I learned from the best.

  • Gayle Hamilton on Jan 23, 2009

    Tears** Tears** ……You have followed well in your fathers foot steps! A Man of Honor and a heart of understanding! Wonderful piece….I love it!

  • OhSugar on Jan 26, 2009

    I truly enjoyed reading your beautiful tribute. The love for your family is reflected through out. I like reading the comments of other friends, and there is one in particular, AC Hamilton III,your dad, that is made me smile and feel joy. Please keep writing.

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