Rising with The Lark

Francois Hagnere on Feb 8, 2011

Tags: flowers, lark, love, park, summer

Thinking of a loved one when not able to sleep.

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As I could never sleep

To you I thought my love

When you and I were happy

Sharing the warmest day ever

Of an endless Summer

Flowers were all around

My hand in your hand

You said it would never end

And so we strolled,

Joy had turned us mad

Why am I now so sad?

And as your silhouette

Looms out of the past,

It seems the dice is cast

But when you come back,

It will never be dark

We will rise with the lark

And walk again to the park.

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Rana Sinha on Feb 8, 2011
Very deep and poignant feelings. What can I say here. Everything passes, so will this. Thanks for sharing.
Brewed Coffee on Feb 8, 2011
It’s sad to be parted from the one you love…but in love we also find hope for wonderful things yet to come.
anndavey650 on Feb 8, 2011
I hope you aren’t sad for too long… but being sad does make for beautiful poetry…
alvinwriter on Feb 8, 2011
Simple joys!
alvinwriter on Feb 8, 2011
They keep memories and bring new ones… life goes on.
Sharif Ishnin on Feb 8, 2011
For every low feeling that will be a new high point to come. Just keep the hope alive and you shall come to that point.Its’ great to see more works like this from you my friend. Very well expressed.
Kopykween on Feb 8, 2011
Straight from the heart, loved it.
JoeLopy on Feb 8, 2011
Don’t give up hope……… Great poem, my friend. Take care.
tonywriter on Feb 8, 2011
Plz don’t give up mate, rejoice it renew it. Remember my friend God lives in Love, he is watching you so fight to win the war of love.
Thanks Fran, immortal poetry. God Bless you!
Starpisces on Feb 8, 2011
wow, Francois, you write very good poem here. Very lovely, happy and yet sad feeling, romantic too.

In case this is real, I wish your love will return soon.
jankovicbozzz on Feb 8, 2011
I am not so passioned about poetry but I really liked this one! It is really something! Thanks for sharing!
trruk1 on Feb 8, 2011
Always hopeful. Yes.
Goodselfme on Feb 8, 2011
Your words have such maudlin tones yet hopefull too. Well carried with cluster words to create good imagery and feel throughout the piece.I liked it very much.
Likha on Feb 8, 2011
I hope you not only rise with the lark but be like the lark, calling out in joyful song and standing tall while holding ground. Keep your flight steady and sharpen your sight, for even if that dear one never comes back,a lasting happiness well deserved shall one day fly and land on your lap… if you never stop believing. All the best, my brother. Take care.
Christine Ramsay on Feb 9, 2011
I have never read a poem by you, Francois. It is such a heartfelt and beautifully written piece. Well done.

Christine
SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 9, 2011
More love lies ahead.
samgoldencoffee on Feb 10, 2011
this is something new, and it is amazingly awesome…
Francois Hagnere on Feb 11, 2011
Many thanks for your kind comments. Take care.
Tiki33 on Feb 14, 2011
This poem is filled with emotion.Thanks for the share my friend.
tonyleather on Feb 15, 2011
Very touching poem. Iadded you as a friend, and read several of your posts, all of which I enjoyed. I will cerainly look out for your work in future. If you could take a look at, and post comments on my efforts, that would be nice. Thanx.
pippe vonkuhne on Feb 18, 2011
Hope all is well Francois, a beautiful poem. Thank you.
Butterfly Musings on Mar 11, 2011
a magnifient poem, great imagery
gaby7 on Mar 13, 2011
Deep and touching!

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