Remembering the fun.

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You smiled as the clouds darken,

not a mere delight, but a dare.

So soon the rain has fallen,

we ran together, no such care.

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You said, we risk it all.

Risk the rain,

that’s our game.

If we get caught, that’s a laugh.

`

You’ve fallen in love back then.

He did not feel, still you gamble.

You said in time he will see.

Your faithful heart, he will find.

`

You said, you risk it all.

Risk the pain,

That’s your game.

If you get hitched, he’s a tease.

`

We gambled and took the risks,

made the wrong turns and we prevailed.

Miles apart now, how I’ve missed.

To laugh with you under the rain.

`

Some people are hard to forget.

This one is for Mai.

Missing her and remembering the good times.

Friends forever!

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  • TwiKnight on Nov 7, 2010

    Ah memories… beautiful piece. :)

  • awesome11 on Nov 7, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 7, 2010

    Beautiful poem. You are very creative!

  • papaleng on Nov 7, 2010

    I\’m speechless. Ganda naman nito. Makata ka talaga.

  • BC Doan on Nov 7, 2010

    You took me back to my childhood memory plashing in the rain with my friends..Beautiful, Phoenix!

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 7, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • PARAM on Nov 7, 2010

    Good one….

    thanks for share.

  • lillyrose on Nov 7, 2010

    thats so beautiful…sometimes you have just got to take risks x

  • Roe2115 on Nov 7, 2010

    Another beautiful poem. Great share.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 7, 2010

    Very beautifully written. And you shaped the lines like a woman.

  • Tulan on Nov 7, 2010

    Well done,

  • CA Johnson on Nov 7, 2010

    Your poem was so beautiful. Love is a gamble.

  • Kaye TM on Nov 7, 2010

    beautiful! =p

  • yes me on Nov 9, 2010

    Really liked this one cheers

  • J M Lennox on Nov 11, 2010

    That is just lovely.

  • mai trasmano on Nov 13, 2010

    Another beautiful one. Cheers to our almost 2 decades of friendship! Friends forever!

  • Ubel Ein on Nov 14, 2010

    This is an extraordinary write, Phoenix!

  • crisdiwata on Nov 18, 2010

    This is very nice really! :)

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 12, 2010

    very nice…

  • mysticdave on Dec 12, 2010

    :)

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