I wrote this poem in 2009. Let me know what you think.

It’s been a long time

A lot has changed.

Now in my 27th year of conception,

I have become 2 degrees colder

Since my last checkup.

My external a hard brown casing

My internal emits light.

The purest shade of white you will ever see

My thoughts no longer analog

Now I’m zoned in digital

Almost infrared

I’m highly advanced

The world is no longer mysterious to me

I know secrets of the ancients

I’ve been to the bottom of the sea.

Amazing

The meaning of life:

Simple enough, Live Life.

How to live is the question

I’m running like a well built engine.

Bavarian Motor Werks

Going downhill in reverse

Fascinating

Look around you

Closely

Scan the landscapes

I’ve left a trail for you to follow

Maybe you should follow your own

I’ve had a head start

Believe I’ve been here before

The lord spoke to me one day

Now I speak in code,Binary

Reverse the blast, IMPLODE

Astonishing

In order to understand

You must learn

Look around you

Look closely

Soon you’ll see.

Don’t be afraid

I prepared myself long ago

In order to understand

Step away from reality

Only temporarily.

See the world through altered states

Absorb what you can

Break down completely

Devolve then reconstruct

Evolve.

Fight through the pain.

Mercury will replace your blood

You are elite,

You are forever,

You are complete.

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  • abah animasi on Aug 22, 2011

    the robot is accurate, but as humans we are too sensitive and it is more perfect as a robot

  • ramkey on Aug 22, 2011

    Excellent poem. The author’s style looks similar to the American poet Albert Goldbirth’s. I have enjoyed many poems of Goldbirth. Sample lines of Goldbirth:

    When I get up in the morning
    The tongue has to crack ice before speaking

    I get the same feeling while reading the above poem. The author should be a born poet but not recognised by the world yet. Maybe, one day he will become world famous like Albert Goldbirth.

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