The luggage in my brain became heavier.

Love is rock & roll!
Every beat and lyrics is powerful
Shaking my world that me tremble
It penetrated in the depth of my soul.
My love is also a burning guitar
Illuminating like a scintillating guitar
You’re near even if you’re afar
I think of you during peace and war.
Babe, my heart is wild and aggressive
I’m sorry, if my music is alternative
Others can’t understand because they’re naive
Because of you I became creative.
The luggage in my brain became heavier
Sometimes Im tired of being headbanger
Even slam dance can’t make make me bolster
Living without you gives me a fever.
I like the rock ballad of Freddie Mercury
Yes, you’re the Queen of my whole identity
Anguish and loneliness has gone easily
Since I was enchanted by your beauty.
You know, I’m a frustrated magician
Playing with words like a magician
Rock & Roll is illusive and sublime
It will never cease till the end of time!

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  • tracy sardelli on May 11, 2008

    a different poem, nice comparrison, well done.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 11, 2008

    owww,like this one

  • goodselfme on Nov 29, 2008

    Nice to have a love as this. I am happy for you!

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