A privates’ private life.

Hello my dear Delaney,
Where were you last night?
Awe no where, just it was a rare nite?
Yes we know.
Wow, you know, how d’yo.
You will soon know,
Now come with me.
 
But where to
The orderly room
Whatever for,
What crime have I done?
I can’t see why this orderly room,
‘Tis no fun
 
Well Mr. Private what did you say,
To Rosalind’s’ daughter
My, Sir, you know her too,
Shut up answer me.
 
Well she smiled, she blushed, and she winked,
After that I couldn’t see,
My eyes blinked.
She planted kisses, so many,
I couldn’t remember returning any.
 
Do you know who she is?
Not that I care much,
As long as she cares for me
Do you know who Sir, Rosalind is?
No Sir, she wasn’t with no one,
So how   would I know?
He is our Commanding Officer,
And do know who are you now?
‘’Aye, aye, Sir, his son –in- law to be, ‘’
and it’s okay by me.

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Comments (11)
  • Darla Smith on Feb 24, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 24, 2009

    nice story with a funny plot…

  • M A Bhanpurwala on Feb 24, 2009

    Nice poem

  • Reilley on Feb 24, 2009

    Great stuff as always my friend.

  • mysticdave on Feb 24, 2009

    good one:)

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 24, 2009

    cute, fun poem.

  • monica55 on Feb 24, 2009

    It’s a nice and funny story.
    monica

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 24, 2009

    Funny story in a cute way.

    AC

  • papaleng on Feb 24, 2009

    a well-written funny poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • Elvin Dilone on Feb 24, 2009

    I like it, very nice poem

  • S A JOHNSON on Mar 1, 2009

    Very interesting

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