Roses Upon My Pillow

pearl2010 on Mar 3, 2010

A sweet poem of love.

Leave a rose

upon my pillow

Before you go,

kiss my lips

so that I’ll know

that the love

I gave you

was not in vain

and that you’ll come

to me again

Let me know

you treasured

all we shared

show me that you

truly cared

Vow your love

before you go,

Look in my eyes

and let me know.

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Comments (23)

AlmaG on Mar 3, 2010
How romantic pearl
Inna Tysoe on Mar 3, 2010
Well done
Cutealice on Mar 3, 2010
Nice writing
johnnydod on Mar 3, 2010
sweet
Stan Wilson on Mar 3, 2010
love and the rose go together and you have brought that out in your poem so beautifully,well done and look forward to your work
8Shei8 on Mar 3, 2010
This is very lovely!
Christine Ramsay on Mar 3, 2010
A very romantic piece.
Hepsi.M on Mar 3, 2010
beautiful poem like the pretty roses
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 3, 2010
It cant be said in better terms, great.
Sharif Ishnin on Mar 3, 2010
The kiss upon the rose.Excellently written.
diamondpoet on Mar 3, 2010
Outstanding and beautiful piece, good job.
ken bultman on Mar 3, 2010
A reasonable request that I hope was honored by the departing lover.
Reilley on Mar 3, 2010
Very nicely done, evocative.
Precious Illusions on Mar 3, 2010
beautiful poem.
albert1jemi on Mar 3, 2010
lovely poem
Michael Eboh on Mar 3, 2010
OUTSTANDING,
BEAUTIFUL,
LOVELY,
&
ROMANTIC.
sambhafusia on Mar 3, 2010
Excellent share..
kaviarasankk on Mar 3, 2010
nice writing
krrymarie on Mar 4, 2010
lovely poem!
Atanacio on Mar 4, 2010
wow I too was touched by your rose very nice poem
pen2010 on Mar 4, 2010
lovely one
standingproud on Mar 5, 2010
a rose upon a pillow, in respect, niceeee.
yes me on Mar 5, 2010
I could just say OK…. but that is not the way.
lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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