You be the judge.

 

i remember when there was a toy called a ‘Sit and Spin’

what we do from beginning to end, spin like a winding clock

our lives a compact disc twirling in a boom box    spin

sometimes throwing caution gaily into the wind

finding and losing friends and then still spin

unto worlds with no end, you see it there

try not to stare, but to much to your suspended chagrin

still spin

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  • Adrn0919 on Feb 9, 2011

    There is not end when spinning everything blends together. We also become dizzy and can lose our balance, physically, emotionally?morally? Best to keep our heads under control. Nicely written.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Feb 10, 2011

    The trick is not to not spinning, but to be sure we dont spin and toil for naught.

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