Ruin

Aardaerimus on Nov 11, 2008

Tags: 2008, Aardaerimus, Haiku, pain, poem, Poetry, ruin, sadness, senryu, shattered, sorrow

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A senryu for the broken.

a world in ruin
broken heart and shattered dreams
wanting to give up

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Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 11, 2008
Very well depicted, and as always perfect in form. I hope this is not your heart right now.
hfj on Mar 19, 2009
Nice haiku. Sounds like the way i feel every day. Well done.

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