Dedicated to my naughty niece – Varshini.

Inheriting her Mother’s nature,

as a seeker of joy –

the daughter of Eve

loved breaking rules.

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  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jul 13, 2010

    a very beautiful and sweet poem in four verses which is a real treat to read. i am sure when varshini grows up and reads this wonderful poem, she will give you a very tight loving hug. i truly enjoyed reading this. i love this and i love all your works. already looking forward to your next work. beautiful.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jul 13, 2010

    i want to leave another comment because i liked this so much. i loved the manner in which you have composed this poem and i am 100% confident your loving niece, Varshini, will cherish this and not only love you but respect you too. awesome work and i love it all.

  • gaby7 on Jul 14, 2010

    Loved breaking rules indeed! But even Adam himself never played to the rules! This was so sweet Kiddy!

  • yes me on Jul 17, 2010

    Cute one kiddy cheers

  • Wordcrafter on Aug 4, 2010

    Interesting . Looking forward to reading more of your work…….

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