I think we all feel like this sometimes.

I want to feel free
I want to  climb up a tree
I want to shout out loud
I want to sleep on a cloud
I want to run naked in the snow
I want to suck your big toe
I want to run with the wolfs
I want to fight with the bulls
I want to do my own thing
I want to swing on a string
I want to be silly with you
I want to dye my hair blue
I want to break from my chains
I want to make love when it rains
I want to be a wild thing
I want to scream and to sing
I just want to be me to the highest degree

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Comments (10)
  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 28, 2009

    You go for it. Well expressed. We all feel like that at times.

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Oct 28, 2009

    Good one. All your wants seem achievable. I don\’t know about hair but running naked in the snow might color your skin blue.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 28, 2009

    Yes, there are times when I do feel this way.

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 28, 2009

    I’m like that all the time…lol.

  • lillyrose on Oct 28, 2009

    that was fun… I have some blue hair spray!!

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 28, 2009

    Nice one…and thanks so much for your kind comments on my post about The Boogie Cafe

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 28, 2009

    A really creative and fun poem! like the part about the toe lol

  • diamondpoet on Oct 28, 2009

    There is nothing like being free to do what ever you want to do.

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Oct 30, 2009

    In the rain sounds very romantic johnny! good one.

  • Snooky on Oct 31, 2009

    Amen, and arupididoo! You got it buddy
    and Im with you

    Excellante!

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