Comments on: Running on Empty

By: STEVE666

STEVE666 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 17:19:22 +0000

Great write, Roxanne—love the using a car as a metaphor.

diamondpoet — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 20:44:26 +0000

I enjoyed, I liked how you described a personal relationship through the word of a vehicle. Thank you!

mystery writter — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 17:40:21 +0000

To me,a stanza was out of place but as a whole it was a very good poem about moving on and living s one should.

Jenny Heart — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 12:42:54 +0000

Nice indeed!

papaleng — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 12:42:18 +0000

A beautiful and inspiring about perseverance.

Jane Jane — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 12:37:42 +0000

nice piece of poem though the format seemed to distract me, the first and some other stanzas.

cardy — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 12:01:01 +0000

A lovely write from you!