Comments on: Running Through the Fog http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/ Fri, 17 Feb 2012 09:50:25 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: VisionsToPonder http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-1851080 VisionsToPonder Sat, 28 Jan 2012 03:10:57 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-1851080 This is a lovely poem. Very well written, the format was spectacular, though hard to read at times. This isn't the type of thing I usually enjoy reading, but this was great. This is a lovely poem. Very well written, the format was spectacular, though hard to read at times. This isn’t the type of thing I usually enjoy reading, but this was great.

]]> By: 1Mind http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-1189452 1Mind Thu, 25 Feb 2010 09:43:00 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-1189452 Incredible work! I am happy to see that you took enough time to create something so wonderfully composed and something with meaning beyond the obvious surface content. Have a great day! Incredible work! I am happy to see that you took enough time to create something so wonderfully composed and something with meaning beyond the obvious surface content. Have a great day!

]]> By: Cynthia Bartlett http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652711 Cynthia Bartlett Thu, 18 Jun 2009 07:58:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652711 Cool! I liked it. Nice. Cool! I liked it. Nice.

]]> By: Deep Blue http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652709 Deep Blue Thu, 14 May 2009 21:07:30 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652709 Nice poem. Nice poem.

]]> By: maranatha http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652707 maranatha Thu, 14 May 2009 02:11:15 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652707 You managed imagery and immediacy, and a life lesson as well. I can't comment on whether it is better, as I never saw the original. But this is well done. You set and altered the tempo with words, format, and style, and kept it right through the end. I like the comparison of a young doe to a woman who never considered her life or path until too late. Beautiful and gripping work! You managed imagery and immediacy, and a life lesson as well. I can’t comment on whether it is better, as I never saw the original. But this is well done. You set and altered the tempo with words, format, and style, and kept it right through the end. I like the comparison of a young doe to a woman who never considered her life or path until too late. Beautiful and gripping work!

]]> By: Inna Tysoe http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652705 Inna Tysoe Tue, 12 May 2009 07:50:03 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652705 That is a lovely piece.<br /> <br /> Thank you,<br /> <br /> Inna That is a lovely piece.

Thank you,

Inna

]]> By: Monica Sappleton http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652703 Monica Sappleton Mon, 11 May 2009 06:55:19 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652703 Oh! OH! This is so piercing and sorrowful. Yet it is a brilliant piece of writing studded with powerful imageries. Excellent job.<br /> Monica. Oh! OH! This is so piercing and sorrowful. Yet it is a brilliant piece of writing studded with powerful imageries. Excellent job.
Monica.

]]> By: theresacall http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652701 theresacall Mon, 11 May 2009 04:45:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652701 great poem great poem

]]> By: MMV Abad http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652699 MMV Abad Mon, 11 May 2009 03:38:23 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652699 You are a master of your craft. I love the flow and the verses. Thank you for sharing this. I might imitate the style if you don't mind :) You are a master of your craft. I love the flow and the verses. Thank you for sharing this. I might imitate the style if you don’t mind :)

]]> By: Tiffany Christopherson http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/comment-page-1/#comment-652697 Tiffany Christopherson Mon, 11 May 2009 01:00:30 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/running-through-the-fog/#comment-652697 This is an amazing write! I enjoyed the imagery and allegory you wove through this poem. This is an amazing write! I enjoyed the imagery and allegory you wove through this poem.

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