S I AM Ese #17

Myles ODonnell on Dec 22, 2008

Tags: Gonzo, introspection, myles, odonnell, poem, Poetry, s I AM ese

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A humorous poem showing two different sides of an interesting, uncaring person.

holy cow!
what is that on yr face???
is it mace???

(Shall I not gaze,
upon thy tormented,
gentle, yet broken face?)

OH my god,
you should get some
one to help you
’cause i gotta go.
good luck man

(It seems as if thou
hast runneth out of luck.)

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Comments (10)

sheba on Dec 22, 2008
Lol! good one enjoyed it!
eddiego65 on Dec 23, 2008
Nice, I like it!
Morgana on Dec 23, 2008
It is different than what I have been reading lately. Enjoyed reading it.
Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 23, 2008
Very interesting, Myles.
nutuba on Dec 23, 2008
I like the rhythm and feel of this.
Randy Bernat on Dec 23, 2008
Not bad.
Eunice Tan on Dec 24, 2008
Good. I’ll check out your stuffs whenever I have chance.
Izzy Daniels on Dec 24, 2008
hmm…humerous yet confusing. you used modern language for parts, yet used stuff from the castle days as well. I liked it, tho I would recomend fixing that spelling error on the second line lol. nice work
Myles ODonnell on Dec 24, 2008
as for the spelling error, izzy, i wanted to keep it to further show the intelligence of that particular speaker
Darren Goad on Dec 31, 2008
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