A Sensually Motivated Poem Instilling The Need To “Be Where Your Feet Are”

Follow the inherent sexy rhythm of thy feet

While melody sways the placement so discreet

Let not your mind guide you in the beat

Not much fun when the pattern is so neat

Flow with your own tempo no need to compete

Feel the pulsating nuances flood too sweet

Life’s a creature of undisputed non repeat

Give it a Whirl without asking for favors’ seat

Who cares if ‘they’ say you’ll end in defeat

Gyrating whirling with no mention of retreat

Passion feeds the soul who spins in heat

Unlike the fearful who all he does is bleat

Untold glory’s found in the blood of the meat

Reap your talents from the field of plenty’s wheat

Stand tall, firm and with such certainty, greet

Your Destiny’s Calling Ruthlessly Made Complete

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  • Christine Ramsay on May 18, 2009

    That is a very clever piece. I often find it difficult to make two lines rhyme. Well done.

    Christine

  • QuinMonty86 on May 18, 2009

    I liked this one Paula. I’m all for following my own drummer!!

  • Paula Andrea Pyle, MA on May 18, 2009

    Christine,

    I appreciate the read. I enjoy writing poetry. It’s a musical feeling;, sort of, like a mini song, to me.

  • Paula Andrea Pyle, MA on May 18, 2009

    QuinMonty86,

    I’m with you, girl. If it’s not about doing what feels ‘gooooood’, I want no part of the deal. Life’s supposed to lived capriciously and excitedly. No fixed box can I fit into!

  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 15, 2009

    Very nice.

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